The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following chart illustrates the fluctuations in prices of three metals on average in a month in the year 2014.
However
, there was a change of 6% in the Linking Words
price
of Nickel in January which dropped dramatically to 1% by March. Another downfall was seen from March to June where the value decreased to -2%. Use synonyms
Then
, there were both rises and falls in Linking Words
Nickel
market which Correct article usage
the Nickel
finally
reached a plateau of 1% and stayed there till the end.
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On the other hand
, The Copper market experienced a continuous downfall after starting at 2% and Linking Words
then
stabilized in the month of June until September at 1% and Linking Words
finally
ended at 2% changes in value. Linking Words
Moreover
, Zinc had a 1% Linking Words
price
fluctuation which reached Use synonyms
at
peak in February with a 3% change and after gradual ups and downs, Correct your spelling
a
finally
the degradation of the Linking Words
price
of Zinc settled down at shy of 2% in December 2014.
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Overall
, Nickel had the most changes in Linking Words
price
at the beginning of the year but the place was taken by Zinc Use synonyms
whereas
Copper remained neutral Linking Words
at the end
of 2014.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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