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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Describe the presentation Explain why you cannot deliver the presentation on the scheduled day Request a different date for your presentation You do NOT need to write any addresses. write at least 150 words Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

#minutes #presentation #work #week #unwell #manager #request #date #addresses
Dear Manager, I'
m
 writing
this
 email regarding
about
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the
presentation
 in the upcoming week. I'
m
 requesting you to postpone the
presentation
on
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 next week. I
was
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 not feeling since two days,
docter
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doctor
 requested me to
take
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rest
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atleast
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at least
 two days.
Therefore
 I
didnt
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didn't
 get time to prepare
presentation
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. I
was
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 not
analysed
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 some of the data related to our project and
need
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 more time to research about content.
I'
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m
 really apologize for
inconvenience
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 caused by me. I asked one of our team
member
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 to take over
this
presentation
 meeting. Unfortunately, they don't have knowledge about our project, they might
failed
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 to
delivery
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 the content to
client
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, there is more chance client might
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dissatified
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dissatisfied
 about our work.
Therefore
, I'
m
 requesting to reschedule the
presentation
 for next week. I will make sure that
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 will spend enough time to prepare the content and present
in
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 the meeting. I'
m
 looking forward
for
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the
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 positive response from you. Regards Dhivya Ravi
Submitted by dhivyaravi0396 on

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coherence and cohesion
Consider checking for minor grammatical errors and maintaining consistent verb tenses for a smoother read. This will enhance the clarity and coherence of your writing.
coherence and cohesion
To improve the logical structure, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single, clear idea. This can help maintain a better flow throughout the letter.
task response
You have clearly addressed all parts of the task, explaining the presentation, your inability to deliver it, and requesting a new date.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and polite, which is suitable for a formal letter to a manager.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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