You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.
Dear Reza
I hope
this
letter find
you well. It Change the verb form
finds
is
a Wrong verb form
has been
while
since we last
catch
up, and I have a program for visiting Wrong verb form
caught
of
your city on my vacation. I booked a ticket Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
for
train
on 25 October and I will go back Correct article usage
a train
my
home on 30 October.
It Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
very good for me if I Wrong verb form
would be
can
stay at your home Wrong verb form
could
in
Change preposition
on
this
trip because I think we are match
together and we will have Correct article usage
a match
fun
time, or I want you Add an article
a fun
help
me Add the particle
to help
for booking
a good place for accommodation.
I Wrong verb form
book
Prefer
stay at your home, Add the particle
Prefer to
also
I am agree
with all Change the verb form
agree
conditions
and requirements you want.
Whether you are my best friend, Correct article usage
the conditions
but
I want to pay Correct word choice
apply
accommodation
fee Correct article usage
the accommodation
to
you. I know recently you Change preposition
for
face
some Wrong verb form
have faced
difficulty
Fix the agreement mistake
difficulties
about
economic issues and it is good for us because we can have fun times and you can overcome Change preposition
with
economical
difficulties.
Anyway, I do not want to ramble on too much. I will see you soon.
Take care!
Best regardsReplace the word
economic
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Coherence and Cohesion
Pay more attention to grammatical structures and verb agreements.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure logical progression of ideas by connecting sentences more smoothly.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing.
Task Achievement
The letter fully addresses the task requirements with details on the visit and stay.
Task Achievement
The tone is friendly and polite, which suits the context of writing to a relative.
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