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Band 5.5

You had traveled by air and had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem -Ask how this issue can be solved

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Dear Manager, I hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing to express my disappointment regarding the flight that I had
traveled
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travelled
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. My name is Mona and I boarded the flight on
25th
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the 25th
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 of
june
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June
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 in the morning from Ahmedabad to Delhi.
Flight
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The flight
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 number is AI108. I would like to tell you about the problem
causing
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caused
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 by some.
Firstly
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, when I reached
to
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apply
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the gate that
mentioned
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was mentioned
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 on the pass, I was told by air staff that they did not have my name on the list.
Hence
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, I was nervous at that time and I requested
to
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them to check on their system
then
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 they
find
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found
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 it.
Secondly
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,
seat
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the seat
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 was not comfortable and
food
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the food
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 was
also
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 not good.
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, I kindly suggest that you consider my dissatisfaction and change seating
as well as
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 edible items as all
passangers
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passengers
 are paying a lot and in return not getting enough services. I look forward to your understanding and cooperation on
this
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 matter.
Your
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Yours
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 sincerely, Mona
Submitted by Darshita@8612 on

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task achievement
Consider providing more details about the events during the flight to strengthen your reasoning.
coherence cohesion
Try to avoid minor grammatical inaccuracies, such as pluralization and article use, to enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins and concludes appropriately with a greeting and closing.
task achievement
The letter clearly mentions the date and flight number, essential details for addressing the complaint.
task achievement
The suitable and polite writing tone enhances the effectiveness of the request.
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