You had traveled by air and had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem -Ask how this issue can be solved

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Dear Manager, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am writing to express my disappointment regarding the flight that I had

traveled

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. My name is Mona and I boarded the flight on

25th

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the 25th

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june

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in the morning from Ahmedabad to Delhi.

Flight

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The flight

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number is AI108. I would like to tell you about the problem

causing

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by some.

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, when I reached

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the gate that

mentioned

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was mentioned

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on the pass, I was told by air staff that they did not have my name on the list.

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, I was nervous at that time and I requested

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apply

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them to check on their system

then

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they

find

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it.

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seat

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the seat

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was not comfortable and

food

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the food

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was

also

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not good.

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, I kindly suggest that you consider my dissatisfaction and change seating

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edible items as all

passangers

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passengers

are paying a lot and in return not getting enough services. I look forward to your understanding and cooperation on

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matter.

Your

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sincerely, Mona

Darshita@8612Thu Nov 07 2024

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task achievement

Consider providing more details about the events during the flight to strengthen your reasoning.

coherence cohesion

Try to avoid minor grammatical inaccuracies, such as pluralization and article use, to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

The letter begins and concludes appropriately with a greeting and closing.

task achievement

The letter clearly mentions the date and flight number, essential details for addressing the complaint.

task achievement

The suitable and polite writing tone enhances the effectiveness of the request.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

7.5

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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