Some people believe that cultural traditions can be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions; others, however, think that this is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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are usually attracted by the cultural diversity when they plan their trips.

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of the main factors that boost the local economy.

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some people believe

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tourists

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resorts bring economic benefits

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instill

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a sense of

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, others worry that these cultural reserves might be in danger of deterioration.

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essay aims to elaborate

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sides and give my opinions. Many documented cases warrant

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concerns when

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tourists

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attractions

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are open to

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. Taking the Great Wall as an example, some parts are full of

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after being visited by

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, who made irreversible changes to the historical sites.

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corroborates the possibility of vandalism made to the preserved

places

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.

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, the culture and charms embedded in these historical

places

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and

artifacts

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might be lost after being renovated to attract customers.

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, the original buildings might be painted and refurnished for

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’ experiences,

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in the loss of their original appearance which carries unique history and

cultures

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. Considering these factors, these cultural heritages should be kept away from potential

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damages

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.

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,

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is said to enhance the local traditions.

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, the local governments,

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of changing the

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of the

places

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are more likely to maintain and repair the

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because of

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.

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, these tourist

attractions

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used to be ignored

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the maintenance that

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their life. Another reason is that the local people will have a sense of

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and

belongings

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because of these tourist

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. Cities usually have

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landmarks that represent

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spirits and history.

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, the

Sydney

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is one of the most well-known landmarks in

Sydney

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, and

forbidden city

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is the signature place in China. These tourist

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represent the local's hometown and their spirits. Just like whenever people think of

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, the first impression

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to mind is that

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is a modern city but has

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of cultural heritage embodied by arts and natural beauty. In my opinion, even though worries about the possible damages are valid,

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is not the culprit to blame. The local authorities can take measures to prevent potential damage by providing education for

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and calling for extra care and protection from the local residents.

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is a good opportunity for delivering

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local charms to the world, and

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one of the main contributors to the local economy. In conclusion, possible damages from

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visits can be prevented if appropriate measures are taken, I am in

favor

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of boosting

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local

tourism

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because of the several benefits aforementioned.