The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides key information about the average cost of monthly contracts for four different mobile ( cell phones) in a European country. The units are measured in
euros
. Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Domo, had the highest rate until September. In addition
, Sim tx start increased until Jun
showed a significant decrease whereas
Alpha fluctuated until Jun
increased significantly. According to
what is shown, DOMO fluctuated in jun
started to increase
and in jul droped, LEX in Feb saw a 10 euro start increase
. In terms of, Sim tx from Jan to May there was increase
in cost until Add an article
an increase
the increase
Jun
Jun
dropped to nearly 7 euros
, Alpha, had the smallest rate in Jan in Apr considerably decreased in Jun
had 5 euros
then
started to increase
to 25 euros
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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