The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These line graphs and pie charts depict data on issues in the year located in the UK. It is clear from the graphs that the highest percentage of crime shown on the graph is above 18
years
for violent crime.
Overall
, we could say that the smallest
age rate shown on the graph is in the oldest people, compared with the other citizens.
Correct word choice
lowest
According to
what is shown, the figure for the line graph began at nearly 7 thousand in 12 years
. Then
, by 20 years
, it had witnessed a dramatic increase of almost 80 thousand. While
the number for 24 years
old
was only 60,000, Correct word choice
apply
however
, it dipped significantly in 28, according to
about 20000. Then
, between 30 and 40 years
, they were nearly fluctuating under 20 thousand.
Regarding the figure for type of society problem, for
drug and property were nearly 22% and 23%, respectively. Change preposition
apply
Afterward
, the figure for Change the spelling
Afterwards
violent
started at a high of approximately 46%, but it experienced a significant decrease in public order, representing less than 10%.Replace the word
violence
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