The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the ratio of people who took part in different activities at one social
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in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020. It generally seems that
while
the
number
of partakers in table tennis, musical performance, and
film
clubs increased, the opposite was true for amateur dramatics.
In addition
, the figure for
film
clubs and materials arts maintained relatively stable numbers, but
film
clubs had the highest figure throughout the period examined. The
film
club consistently had the highest
number
of
participants
, starting at around 60 in 2000 and hovering around 65 by 2020. Martial arts began with approximately 35
participants
in 2000 but gradually declined to around 25 by 2020. the
number
of members of Amateur Dramatics had plunged from 25 to 8 after 20 years. The opposite change could be seen in the figure for the
number
of
participants
who took part in table tennis, starting at 20
participants
in 2000 and soaring to approximately 65 by 2020. Musical performances started with nearly zero
participants
in 2000 but saw significant growth, reaching around 20
participants
before ending the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, film, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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