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given
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enrollment
for six different courses at a UK college of education in 2010 and 2012.
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, immediately appeared that great change was observed in the percentage of Linking Words
enrollment
to the sports since.
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2010
there was a huge demand for social studies over Add a comma
2010,
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of the total. Nursing was the second most popular course to Add a hyphen
one-fifth
enroll
but it fell drastically to half, two years later. Change the spelling
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Initially
enrolment for sports science was very low at 11.9 % . Add a comma
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However
, it increased significantly over the two years to represent the largest proportion of enrolments in 2012 at 25.5%.
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in the remaining three courses. Add a missing verb
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on
the engineering course went up slightly to 18.5% in 2012, but psychology Change preposition
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for carpentry, which experienced very low levels of Add an article
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enrollment
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