A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.
Dear Cafe Manager,
I am writing in the context of
difficulty
I am facing Correct article usage
the difficulty
while
going to college from the front of your restaurant.
Actually, I go to my college 5-days
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5 days
in
a week, taking Change preposition
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a pederstrian
pederstrian
path in front of your prestigious place. Correct your spelling
pedestrian
pedestrians
While
,
most of the times your employees put the chairs and table on the pavement, it gets so difficult Remove the comma
apply
so
me to cross from there Correct your spelling
to
also
I am required to go down on the road that some time
become Replace the word
sometimes
danagerous
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dangerous
,
because road always has a lot of traffic.
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Furthermore
, it becomes uneasy for me to go without taking any help. Moreover
, I feel helpless and pitty when there is no help around me. Also
, last
week I got late to my classes because I was waiting for someone to clear path
or lend me a hand to cross Correct article usage
the path
table
and chair.
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the table
Therefore
, I believe you can understand what I am feeling and will take some steps to help me and other
who are experiencing difficulties. Fix the agreement mistake
others
Nevertheless
, I will be thinking of taking some steps if not taken by you to address this
issue like going to Police
or local authorities.
I am hoping for some Correct article usage
the Police
postive
feedback and Correct your spelling
positive
reply
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a reply
form
you soon.
Regards
SoojanaCorrect your spelling
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider separating different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity.
Task Achievement
Ensure spelling and grammatical errors are minimized for improved clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter contains a clear greeting and closing, providing a polite framework for the complaint.
Task Achievement
You effectively describe the problem, its impact, and a proposed solution.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite