The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the blueprint offered to a new
town
, where peolpe
will have housing, Correct your spelling
people
roads
, ring roads
, industry, parking, bus stand and recreational area.
Overall
, most
significant development can be seen for housing which indicates "H", there Correct article usage
the most
also
road rings around the Add a missing verb
are also
town
and link rodes will lead to exit
and Fix the agreement mistake
exits
entrance
.
The Fix the agreement mistake
entrances
town
is surrounded by housing and two industries can be located in the northwest as well as
southeast part of the town
. There is
Change the verb form
are
also
four roads
which connects
to the ring Change the verb form
connect
roads
, inside of
the ring road six Change preposition
apply
housing
can be seen.
Fix the agreement mistake
housings
Moreover
, parking found in the middle of the town
which is central
part of the Add an article
a central
the central
town
as well as
at the same side bus stand are available. Then
, recreational area
can be found inside Fix the agreement mistake
areas
of
the ring road which Change preposition
apply
located
middle of the south and east Add a missing verb
is located
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
town
also
few recreational area
Change to a plural noun
areas
located
in Add a missing verb
are located
outer
layer of ring Add an article
the outer
roads
which is located in the south, where housing will be placed.Submitted by AL NURE FOYZUR REZA SUPRIO on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, as well as".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, roads with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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