The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write 150 words.
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The given bar chart compares data about the proportion of 5 various industries in the economy of Brazil at 3 points in time namely, 2009, 2019, and 2029.
Overall
, It will be important that all items
instead
of Finance, the huge section, will be reduced in the future.
According to
the diagram, at the start, Finance, the most important section in Brazil's economy in the past and the future, hit nearly 30%;
then
it increased and will climb moderately to just over 40% in 2029. The second one was fossil fuels, whose names are Oil, Coal, and Gas, which reached a quarter in 2009;
then
it went up and touched the vertex at 30% in 2019;
however
, it will decline to the fraction that will be the same as in 2009. The graph demonstrates that Tourism recorded the same percentage as Fossil fuel in 2009 after that, it fell to one-fifth in 2019;
moreover
, its portion will stabilize.
in contrast
to finance's trend , Manufacturing went down slightly from 20% in 2009 to 15% in 2019;
additionally
, it will record 5% in 2029. at the start, Food processing reported 10% ;
thereafter
, in 2019 it peaked at 20%;
although
, it will reach the same fraction as the starting number.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage share
  • economic growth
  • industry forecast
  • notable growth
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • economic landscape
  • industry sector
  • projected growth
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • industrial transformation
  • mature industry
  • economic policies
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