You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, workers

works

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so bad terms.

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, they don'

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earn

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a good

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salary. We can notice

this

unfair system, there is no doubt. I think

this laws

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is

positive

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a positive

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development for

public

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the public

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. İnitialy, if workers can'

t

earn good money,

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rise to inflation, and nobody can'

t

buy anything. The inflation

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increased to

highest

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the highest

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level

last

year in İtaly. They solved the

problem

, and their method was

limit

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working

hours

for employees. that was

a

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the

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biggest

problem

in the country.

Secondly

,

other

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another

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problem

is unemployment. Adults and young people don'

t

want to work in these terms,and

this

affect

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affects

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to

economical

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economic

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position of citizens.

Also

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education and government influence them.Harvard

Universty's

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Professors say "

work's

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work

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hour

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hours

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and

economy

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the economy

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have a connection

each

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other, Becauseif you can'

t

find any

employe

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employees

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,

industry

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the industry

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is

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can'

t

developing

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develop

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. That was improved by experts.

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, it has

also

positive

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staff. İnitialy, if

work's

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work

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hours

are rising,

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,

economy

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the economy

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is increasing. Workers are

out put

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output

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, and industry is

in put

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input

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.

This

works like coding chains. They have a connection

each

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other. Experts

aproveled

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approved

this

methofor

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method

.

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, working

hours

is

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are

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not only

affecing

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affecting

economy

,

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but

also

our health. One experiment shows us to which

problem

can it born because of the working

hours

. The result was many

headeach

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headaches

headache

head each

,

and

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lower back pain,

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many other

promlems

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problems

. İn conclusion, working

hours

can make bad

result

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results

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, but

also

good

result

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results

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. İn

this

essay, ı shared my opinions, my ideas, and my solving methods with

evidences

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evidence

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.