The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart compares data about the number of wheat per million tonnes sent to other countries by Australia, Canada and the European Community between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
, it was important that the trend of European countries
instead
of the others increased over the period of 5 years.
According to
the graph, at the start, Canada, the best country that had the highest wheat exports in 1985, touched approximately 19 after that, it declined to nearly 13 in 1986;
then
it leapt significantly and peaked at 25 in 1988;
however
, it fell somewhat and reached the nadir at nearly 14in 1989;
finally
, it reported just under 20. The diagram demonstrates that in the beginning, European countries hit roughly 17;
then
it reduced and touched the minimum point at nearly 14 in 1986;
thereafter
, it climbed slightly to 15 in 1987, and its figure stabilized until 1988;
then
it jumped moderately to almost 21 in 1990. Australia, the
last
region in 1985, recorded 15 in 1985;
thereafter
, it grew and hit the vertex at nearly 16 in 1986;
although
,
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it dipped marginally to almost 11 in 1989 after that, its number was constant until 1990.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • rise
  • surpass
  • modest growth
  • significant
  • stability
  • comparisons
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