A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter: describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is to draw your attention to the issue I am facing
due to
the chairs and tables that were put out on the pavement near my house, by the cafe that you run.
On Tuesday
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Tuesday,
17
I was unpleasantly surprised to find your cafe’s outdoor seating placed right next to my garage doors. You can imagine how Add a comma
17,
inconvienient
it was, as it blocked the entrance to my house and made the drivers behind me complain as the traffic was formed. I immediately reached out to the staff who was on the shift that day and they kindly apologized for the hassle, moving the furniture out of my way.
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inconvenient
Nevertheless
, the same situation happened the next week. I have noticed that the furniture is not taken out until 9 a.m. At this
time I am already at my work, thus
it does not affect me anyhow. Nonetheless
, the tables as well as
the chairs are already set out outside when I come back from work at around 6 p.m.
As this
situation brings discomfort to me as well as
your customers, I would nicely ask you to find a way to erase the hindrance. The ideal solution would be finding another place for the
outdoor seating or using Correct article usage
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be a way out.
However
, if no action is taken by the end of this
week, I am going to have to contact the police office, which, hopefully, is going to help to find a compromise for both sides. I trust the situation will improve as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by oimigle on
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grammar
Consider checking the spelling of 'inconvenient' to avoid minor spelling errors.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure, moving from describing the problem to explaining its impact and suggesting a solution.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, including describing the problem, its effects, and potential solutions.
task achievement
You maintained a polite and formal tone appropriate for a complaint letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, keeping the letter organized and clear.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite