Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the production levels of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000. The unit of measurement used in energy is millions of tones.
Overall
, natural gas shows an increasing trend of upward movement from the beginning of the
year
to the end,
While
the the other two, petroleum and coal show fluctuating movement from the start.
To begin
with, in 1981 natural gas, started at around 40
million
tonnes
, but slowly increased to above 40
million
tonnes
in 1991 until it reached the peak of 100
tonnes
million
in 2000. Looking at the trend of petroleum, the starting point climbed to 140
million
tonnes
until 1986,
hence
, in 1991 it declined to just under 100
million
tonnes
then
went up again moderately to 140
million
tonnes
, remains to stabilize throughout the
year
maintaining
to
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140
million
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, coal, in 1981 started at 80
million
tonnes
decreased to 40
million
tonnes
in 1986,
then
went up slightly to just under 60
million
tonnes
in 1986 until the
year
1991,
then
slowly going down to below 40
million
tonnes
at the end
of the
year
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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