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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the production levels of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000. The unit of measurement used in energy is millions of tones.
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, natural gas shows an increasing trend of upward movement from the beginning of the
year
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 to the end,
While
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 the the other two, petroleum and coal show fluctuating movement from the start.
To begin
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 with, in 1981 natural gas, started at around 40
million
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tonnes
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, but slowly increased to above 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1991 until it reached the peak of 100
tonnes
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million
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 in 2000. Looking at the trend of petroleum, the starting point climbed to 140
million
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tonnes
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 until 1986,
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, in 1991 it declined to just under 100
million
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tonnes
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then
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 went up again moderately to 140
million
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tonnes
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, remains to stabilize throughout the
year
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 maintaining
to
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apply
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140
million
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tonnes
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.
On the other hand
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, coal, in 1981 started at 80
million
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tonnes
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 decreased to 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986,
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 went up slightly to just under 60
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986 until the
year
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 1991,
then
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 slowly going down to below 40
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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 of the
year
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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