The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The image illustrates the cycle of
water
in forests and cities.
Overall
, there are six stages in both forested and urban areas. The water
cycle begins and ends at
the sky, starting Change preposition
in
from
precipitation and ending in transpiration.
In Change preposition
with
forest
Add an article
the forest
area
, the precipitation becomes the first stage, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
that
pouring down to the land. The Correct word choice
apply
water
reaches permeable topsoiland
and infiltrates to less permeable subsoil on rock. Correct your spelling
topsoil and
topsoil
In addition
, the water
table which is located below less permeable subsoil flows to runoff. The evaporation and transpiration are working smoothly due to
the trees in Correct article usage
the forests
forests
area.
In urban Change the noun form
forest
area
, the precipitation is not working smoothly Fix the agreement mistake
areas
due to
the absence of the
trees. Correct article usage
apply
This
stage affects reduced infiltration in less permeable subsoil on rock. This
effect creates other disadvantages such
as reduced baseflow and increased erosion below the land. Finally
, the water
increases polluted run off
because of reduced transpiration and evaporation.Correct your spelling
runoff
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