The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates the cycle of

water

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in forests and cities.

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, there are six stages in both forested and urban areas. The

water

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cycle begins and ends

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the sky, starting

from

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with

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precipitation and ending in transpiration. In

forest

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the forest

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area

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areas

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, the precipitation becomes the first stage,

that

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apply

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pouring down to the land. The

water

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reaches permeable

topsoiland

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topsoil and

topsoil

and infiltrates to less permeable subsoil on rock.

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, the

water

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table which is located below less permeable subsoil flows to runoff. The evaporation and transpiration are working smoothly

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the trees in

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the forests

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forests

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area. In urban

area

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areas

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, the precipitation is not working smoothly

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the absence of

the

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trees.

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stage affects reduced infiltration in less permeable subsoil on rock.

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effect creates other disadvantages

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as reduced baseflow and increased erosion below the land.

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, the

water

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increases polluted

run off

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runoff

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because of reduced transpiration and evaporation.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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