The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The image illustrates the cycle of
water
in forests and cities.
Overall
, there are six stages in both forested and urban areas. The
water
cycle begins and ends
at
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the sky, starting
from
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precipitation and ending in transpiration. In
forest
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the forest
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area
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, the precipitation becomes the first stage,
that
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pouring down to the land. The
water
reaches permeable
topsoiland
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topsoil and
topsoil
and infiltrates to less permeable subsoil on rock.
In addition
, the
water
table which is located below less permeable subsoil flows to runoff. The evaporation and transpiration are working smoothly
due to
the trees in
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forests
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area. In urban
area
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, the precipitation is not working smoothly
due to
the absence of
the
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trees.
This
stage affects reduced infiltration in less permeable subsoil on rock.
This
effect creates other disadvantages
such
as reduced baseflow and increased erosion below the land.
Finally
, the
water
increases polluted
run off
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runoff
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because of reduced transpiration and evaporation.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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