The chart above shows details about the percentage of the human population in four Asian Countries. Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia, that are living in main cities from 1970 to 2020. with a guess for 2030 and 2040.

The chart above shows details about the percentage of the human population in four Asian Countries. Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia, that are living in main cities from 1970 to 2020. with a guess for 2030 and 2040.
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The following line chart depicts the information related to the proportion of the human
population
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in four Asian countries, Philippines,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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that were living in main cities from 1972 to 2040 with a guess for 2030 and 2040.I will elaborate on the detail in
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Overall
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, taking a quick glance at the chart, we can see the
percentage
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of
Malaysia
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skyrocketed from 1970 to 2040
while
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the
population
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of
Thailand
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is the least in 2040 . Starting with the Philippines and
Malaysia
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, we can notice that in 1970 both countries had almost the same
population
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proportion (30%).
However
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, if we move on
further
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we can see that the graph of
Malaysia
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keeps on surging and
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a peak in 2040 (approximately 80 per cent)
whereas
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there are many crusts and troughs in the Philippines chart .
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the figure witnessed ,till 1980 it remained constant at 30% after that inclined, till 1992 and reached approx 50% and
then
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declined till 2010 and became 40% . Probing
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it again starts rising from 2010 to 2040 and becomes 40% . Moving toward
Indonesia
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and
Thailand
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. One can see that there is not much variation in the Indonesian
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percentage
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line as in
Thailand
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. The
population
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percentage
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of
Indonesia
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kept increasing, on a static pace from 1970 to 2014 and reached 60% from 12% . Talking about
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Although
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in the 1970s, the
population
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was more than
Indonesia
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got passed by
Indonesia
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in 2000. The
percentage
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of
Thailand
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remained constant from 1990 to 2020
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but will start increasing swiftly from 2022
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to 2014 and will reach up to 40% in 2040.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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