The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
table
and charts below show the police budget
for 2017 and 2018 in a specific place of
Britain. The Change preposition
in
table
illustrates the source of the money
and the charts show how the money
was spent.
To begin
, the table
below shows that a big portion of the money
was gathered from the National Government with a value of 175.5 million
in 2017 and 177.8 million
in 2018. In addition
, local taxes are another source of the police budget
. The money
from local taxes in 2017 was 91.2 million
whereas
, in 2018 was 102.3 million
. Moreover
, there are other sources of money
. For instance
, grants with a budget
of 38 million
in 2017 and 38.5 million
in 2018. Finally
, it is noticeable that the budget
increased in 2018.
The charts show the way money
was spent in the years 2018 and 2017. Firstly
, most of the money
was spent on staff salaries with 69 per cent
in 2018 and 75 per cent
in 2017. Secondly
, buildings and transport took 17 per cent
of the money
in both 2017 and 2018. Thirdly
, the amount of money
spent on technology increased by 6 per cent
in 2018. To sum up
, it is clear that
the amount of money
spent on salaries was decreased to raise the budget
for technology.
In conclusion, the table
shows that the police budget
increased in 2018. Furthermore
, money
spent on buildings and transport remained the same ,however
increased for technology and decreased for salaries.Add a comma
however,
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