The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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bar chart illustrates Verb problem
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infarmation
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information
households
in the country Rephrase
how households
spend
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spent
thier
weekly salary in Correct your spelling
their
this
period 1968 Correct determiner usage
the
till
2018. Change preposition
to
Overall
, there are 8 various like food,housing,fuel and power. So, the highest one was food in 1968, but, after 50 years later this
type was decreasing.
Also
, there are other types which were spending weekly money for leisure in 2018 with 20-25 % and housing in the same period. But, in this
chart
we can see decreasing classifications like personal goods,clothing and Add a comma
chart,
foodware
with the lowest number. Correct your spelling
footwear
Furthemore
, other activities with the same positions in 1968 stayed in the same way.
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Furthermore
Although
, the fuel and power had a little increasing percentage than 1968. Hence
, as we can see, the highest one was food in 1968, but, in 2018 was leisure, and, the lowest one was fuel in 1968 and in 2018 was personal goods.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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