THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF SECONDARY SCHOOL STUDENTS at a school in the UK taking different subjects in 1995 and this year.

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The provided by chart illustrates the proportion of secondary school pupils in a school who chose various subjects between 1995 and the present year.

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, geography was opted by 21% of students which increased slightly to 23% in the current year.

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, RS was selected by 9% and drama by 12% of students in the past.

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the subject was replaced by IT with 27% of scholars.

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, in the case of the remaining stream History and Business, there were no changes shown till today where the business side was chosen by 16% in both years.

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history has dropped by only 1% till now.

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, the arts category

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decreased from 15% in the former year to 8% in the latter.

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, the RS and drama branches were removed and

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merged into the IT section which has the most students.

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, the rest are almost the same.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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150 words

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