The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs depict the total value of
exports
of a certain country
in addition
to the worth of exported food,
fuel
and manufactured goods from the year 2000 to the year 2005.
Overall
, a surge in the value of total
exports
during the aforementioned time span can be easily noticed.
Firstly
, the
exports
related to
fuel
witnessed an important drop between 2000 and 2005. Indeed the worth of the " black oil" passed from more than 40000 million dollars to exactly an amount of 20000 million dollars during the whole period.
However
, the amount brought by the sale of manufactured commodities increased slightly, overrating the
fuel
incomes.Concerning the
exports
of food, linked incomes remained stable during the whole period with some slight oscillations.
In contrast
, the decline in
fuel
exports
was accompanied by a boom in the total export value.In fact, these incomes plummeted between 2000 and 2002 before featuring a dramatic rise exceeding 400000 million dollars in 2005.
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