The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the levels of
production
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of different types of
energy
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sources in the UK during the time period of 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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, petroleum remained the top
energy
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source of the UK from the start to the end and the popularity of coal decreased in the late 90s
while
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the demand for natural gas increased significantly at the same time. In the case of petroleum, the
production
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was more than 80
energy
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units
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in 1981 which reached the mark of 140 in 1984 and got stabilized until 1987 and
then
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had a significant fall in 1990 and after some years, the rate increased and finished at 140 mark during 2000.
However
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, the
production
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of natural gas had a plateau of 40
energy
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units
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and the number showed a gradual growth from 1990 and the number reached 100
energy
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units
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at the end
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of the timeline.
On the other hand
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, coal
production
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was 80
energy
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units
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in 1981 which got a sudden fall and the
production
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came down to a shy of 40
energy
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units
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in 1984 and after some ups and downs, the number reached the mark below 40
energy
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units
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in 2000 as coal was losing its popularity continuously.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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