When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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service
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product
while
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belive
that writing about our Correct your spelling
believe
feedback
is more benefitial
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beneficial
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, the written form would be
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make it
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services to remember all the details of your Correct your spelling
customer
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, giving them an apportunity
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opportunity
meticulosly
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meticulously
Also
, in verbal communication people
might face distraction, leading to lack
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a lack
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understanding
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problem
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problems
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details
however
, written communication is more clear. For example
, some studies reveal that people
generally are likely to remember the details of a book more clear
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clearly
then
an audio form of the same book.
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Furthermore
, many of the letters
have specific numbers and records, making them easy to track. Thus
, individuals are able to monitor their letters
and be assured that their letters
have been receiced
. If Correct your spelling
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customer
service
had not responded to people
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complaints
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Additionally
, individuals could keep the letters
as an evidence
and sue the company if they did not carry out their agreement. Remove the article
evidence
a piece of evidence
a shred of evidence
For instance
, in
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Amazon
website, individuals can contact Correct article usage
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service
by sending an Email
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apply
reminder
and document them.
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reminders
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some people
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in-person
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accuracy
Be careful with spelling mistakes such as 'idividuals' instead of 'individuals', 'apportunity' instead of 'opportunity', 'meticulosly' instead of 'meticulously', 'undrestanding' instead of 'understanding', and 'ditails' instead of 'details'.
detail
You could strengthen your argument by providing more examples and elaborating on them. Try to include a personal anecdote or a recent study that supports your preference for written communication.
structure
The introduction and conclusion effectively frame your argument, setting the stage and neatly wrapping it up.
logic
The essay maintains a logical structure. It clearly articulates a preference and provides two main reasons to support the argument.
examples
You effectively use examples like Amazon's customer service to support your argument about the benefits of written complaints.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.
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