The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The line graph provided demonstrates different
activites
old people do reading, hiking, theatre, watching TV and surfing the internet in their leisure time in the period of 30 years.
Correct your spelling
activities
Overall
from the graph
we can notice that watching TV has always been the favourite Add a comma
graph,
activity
by maintaining its place at the top except for the last
decade it fell to be the second activity
after being overtaken by hiking.
In Fix the agreement mistake
detail
details
we see that hiking started off at 20% in Add a comma
details,
early
1980s and it experienced a linear increase until reaching a Change the article
the early
percent
of 80% in Change the spelling
per cent
2010s
which has Correct article usage
the 2010s
becomes
the highest compared to any other Change the verb form
become
activity
done by elderly people at that time.
Meanwhile, surfing the internet started at a very low rate of almost 5% in 1980s
and was the least done Change the article
the 1980s
activity
compared to the other four until it had a dramatic increase in 2000s
.Correct article usage
the 2000s
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words activity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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