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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates how much
tea
 and
coffee
 was imported by Canada,
US
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the US
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,
UK
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the UK
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 and
Germany
. Units are measured in
tonnes
.
Overall
, the
UK
 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
 of
tea
 followed by
Germany
.
Furthermore
,
highest
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amount
 of
coffee
 was produced by
Germany
 and
UK
 imported the least. When examining the details, it becomes evident that
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and
Germany
has
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have
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 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
 of
tea
, which is 80000
tonnes
 and just over 40000
tonnes
 by
germany
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Germany
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. It can
also
 be seen that both Canada and
US
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the US
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has
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have
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 imported almost
same
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the same
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amount
 of
tea
 which is approximately 20000
tonnes
. In terms of
coffee
,
Germany
 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
 of
coffee
 which is 50000
tonnes
 followed by
Canda
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Canada
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 and
US
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the US
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 which almost imported 40000
tonnes
,
Moreover
,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 only imported 30000
tonnes
 of
coffee
 which is the least among all four countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, uk, germany, tonnes, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imports
  • tonnes
  • volume
  • trend
  • contrast
  • pattern
  • average
  • country-specific data
  • significant difference
  • beverage
  • ranking
  • highlight
  • fluctuate
  • proportion
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