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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates how much
tea
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 and
coffee
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 was imported by Canada,
US
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the US
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,
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UK
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the UK
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 and
Germany
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. Units are measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the
UK
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 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
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 of
tea
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 followed by
Germany
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.
Furthermore
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,
highest
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the highest
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amount
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 of
coffee
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 was produced by
Germany
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 and
UK
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 imported the least. When examining the details, it becomes evident that
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and
Germany
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has
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have
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 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
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 of
tea
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, which is 80000
tonnes
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 and just over 40000
tonnes
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 by
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germany
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Germany
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. It can
also
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 be seen that both Canada and
US
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the US
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has
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have
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 imported almost
same
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the same
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amount
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 of
tea
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 which is approximately 20000
tonnes
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. In terms of
coffee
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,
Germany
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 imported
highest
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the highest
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amount
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 of
coffee
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 which is 50000
tonnes
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 followed by
Canda
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Canada
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 and
US
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the US
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 which almost imported 40000
tonnes
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,
Moreover
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,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 only imported 30000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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 which is the least among all four countries.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, uk, germany, tonnes, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imports
  • tonnes
  • volume
  • trend
  • contrast
  • pattern
  • average
  • country-specific data
  • significant difference
  • beverage
  • ranking
  • highlight
  • fluctuate
  • proportion
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