Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. some people think this is beneficial for the childrens of this families, while other think children will find it difficus. discuss both views and give your oppinion

The opportunities to work abroad are more today than they have ever been in the history of mankind. The big planet

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has become a small global village and sovereign barriers seem to have disappeared.

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working in a foreign country, some individual take their family with them.

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situation has

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merits

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demerits but

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the pros outweigh the cons There are many obvious benefits of going abroad to work

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family.

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with, individuals have more bonding with the family, the family relationship is not weekend by distance, some

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end

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up in divorce, as one or

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of them cannot adjust in

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country and return home thereby missing the golden opportunity of working abroad. the most important point is that children, especially

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are

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young ages, need

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care from

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parents. childhood is a crucial phase of life and comes only once. If the children are deprived of one of the

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love, it may have a considerable impact on their psyche.

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working abroad with the family can provide complete love and care to the children.

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, there are some

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of

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working abroad with families.

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with, living with family members abroad means more expense. A single person can share a room with someone in the initial stages but a complete family needs a proper house. what is more, all the

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face

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of adaption to alien surroundings parents themselves feel

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cannot help their

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.

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, there are

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advantages and disadvantages

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any choice of

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issue. Personally,

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believe that people should decide

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their specific circumstances

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if there are financial

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it is better to go alone

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however

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the family should be called as early as

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possible

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