The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart illustrates the two different age groups watching
television
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a television
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using electronic devices in Canada aged 18 to 25 from 2009 to 2019.
In 2009, most Change preposition
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people
usually watched movies on conventional TV
with the numbers at 34%. After that, laptops become
the second Wrong verb form
became
choice
which was usually chosen by 20% of the public. In addition
, the Desktop computer was the third option commonly used by people
as much as 18%. Furthermore
, Mobile phones were a popular option with 15%. Moreover
, flat screen TV
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TVs
tablet
had the smallest numbers at 8% and 5% respectively.
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tablets
Secondly
, as the development in 2019, Flat screen TV
was the common choice
at 27%. Then
, mobile phones had one of the largest percentages at 26%. Besides
, tablets were still a popular choice
at 19%. Laptop and desktop computers had a slight decrease of 12%. On the other hand
, conventional TV
was very rarely used at that time as only 4% of the population used it.
In conclusion, there was asignificant
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a significant
changed
in Canadian society regarding watching television activities as in 2019, most of the Replace the word
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people
used flat screen TVs more than conventional TVs. However
, mobile phones, tablets, as well as
laptops and desktop computers were still the choice
for people
to watch TV
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