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The chart below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012

The chart below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012
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The given bar graph demonstrates data on
the
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milk
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 exportation from three countries of
Europa
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Europe
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in
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from
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 2008
-
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2012
years
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. From an
overall
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 perspective, it can be clearly seen that the number of
milk
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 exports increased noticeably in Russia from 2008 to 2012,
whereas
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 in Italy the situation was observed in the given time period.
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, the number of exports of
milk
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 in Poland remained stable
these
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 times. When it comes to the figure named Russia, there was an increase in
count
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the count
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 of
milk
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 exportation from 25 to 40 between 2008-2010, but
,
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in, next
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next
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the next
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 two
years
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, it decreased to 28. The count of
milk
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 exports in Italy increased by 4 from 16 in 2008-2010
years
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, but it
levalled
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levelled
 off at 20 by 2
years
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 from 2010. Turning to Poland,
firstly
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, the count of
milk
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 decreased regularly from 12 to 6 between 2008-2010
years
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.
Secondly
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, next two
years
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, it returned almost to
original
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its original
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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