the pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates the proportion of individuals both men and women were taken into custody in five
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by the end of 1994,
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the table outlines the observations made in regard to the reasons for the arrests during the given period.
Overall
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, it is clear from the pie chart that men were arrested more than
females
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throughout the
years
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. The data in the table reveals that the main reason for the arrest was for public drinking followed by drunk driving. Significantly, women surpassed men in public drinking for the recorded period. From the pie chart, one-third of the males (32%) got arrested in the five
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ending 1994.
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females
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accounted for 9%
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of arrests
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in five
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.
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, non-arrested males and
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in the same period were 65% and 91% , respectively.
According to
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the table, about 38% of
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were detained for public drinking followed by assault (18%).
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, 31% of male counterparts were arrested for public drinking and least of less than 5% for no answer.
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female counterparts dominated males in public drinking, assault and no answer.
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