The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
production
levels of the main fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
petroleum and natural gas
shows
Wrong verb form
have shown
show examples
a significant
increased
Replace the word
increase
show examples
throughout the years,
while
coal shows the opposite by
decreased
Wrong verb form
decreasing
show examples
constantly.
The petroleum
Correct article usage
Petroleum
show examples
started from over 80
units
in 1981, being the highest
production
of fuels at the time. The
production
increased sharply to 140
units
in 1984 and remained stable until 1987. The number
then
slummped
Correct your spelling
slumped
to 100
units
in 1990 before it rose gradually until 140
units
in 2000. The trend
also
applied to natural gas, the
production
started from 40
units
in 1981 and remained constant until 1990 before it soared until reaching its peak of 100
units
in 2000.
In contrast
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
coal
shows
Wrong verb form
has shown
show examples
a
declined
Change the form of the verb
decline
show examples
over the years. It started from 80
units
in 1981
then
it plummeted to less than 40
units
in 1984. The number climbed to 60
units
in 1986 and stabilised before it slowly fell until it
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
show examples
less than 40
units
in 2000.
Submitted by salwaputrihardiyan on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
What to do next:
Look at other essays: