The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows Southland’s main exports in the

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2000,2024 and future estimates for 2025, focusing on three different

export

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categories: international

tourism

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dairy

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and

meat

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products

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. In 2000, international

tourism

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led Southland's exports, contributing 8

billion

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pounds

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Dairy

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products

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followed closely behind at approximately 7

billion

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pounds

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while

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meat

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products

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were slightly lower at around 6

billion

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pounds

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. A closer look at the data reveals that in 2024 both international

tourism

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and

dairy

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products

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have experienced growth ,each increasing by one

billion

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pounds

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. International

tourism

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reached 9

billion

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pounds

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and

dairy

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products

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achieved 10

billion

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pounds

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, a decrease of approximately 500 million

pounds

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was shown in the

export

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meat

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products

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. Projections for 2025 suggest that international

tourism

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will dominate Southland’s

export

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economy by reaching 10

billion

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pounds

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while

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dairy

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products

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will follow with faintly less. Meanwhile ,

meat

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products

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are expected to experience a decline ,arriving at 5

billion

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pounds

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Overall

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, Southland’s

export

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economy is shifting towards a stronger reliance on international

tourism

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and

dairy

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products

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while

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meat

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products

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export

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is expecting a decline .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, tourism, dairy, meat, products, billion, pounds with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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2 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

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projections
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international tourism
dairy products
meat products
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main features
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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

Every year, several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?