The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line graph provides a key information
about the crime Remove the article
key information
a piece of key information
level
in the USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa
btween1985 to 2020.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the cities
homicide and sexual Change noun form
city's
cities'
violance
levels are the lowest, in the other hand the serious Correct your spelling
violence
assaults
Change noun form
assaults'
assault's
livle
were higher than decreased in the Correct your spelling
levels
last
years.
according to
what showed, in cities homicide in all years begin 2003 the rates less than 25, but
in 2008 the level
grew a little thin back normaly, if we look at sexual violence it is so close to cities
homicide that it was less than 50, but in 2015 the Change the noun form
city
level
started to increase to be
50 in 2017.
In terms of serious assaults between 2003 to 2005, the Unnecessary verb
apply
level
was to much high that it was more than
200, after that the level
does not change for 3 years , in 2008 the rate decreased by
a normal way
in 2012 the Change preposition
in
level
dawn so fast to be less than 150 and be so close to the robbery level
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