The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

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graph

illustrates the

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proportion

of New

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population during the period from 1950 to 2050

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the elderly encompass the

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proportion of society during the question period

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, the children's number was at

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position in 2050.

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1950 to 1990 , the age over 65 increased gradually their population with 60% , meanwhile, keeping the highest place among the other ages over the 4 decades. People between 38 and 45 were in second place in terms of their numbers with around 25%,

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upward trend. Followed by the ages between 0 and 14, 25 and 37 which had 20% and 8% respectively, had the

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numbers and their trends rather

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steady.

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1990 to 2000, it seems that except

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