You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The search for new sources of

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is responsible for an immense expenditure each year. In my opinion, it is of paramount importance that money should be invested

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the development of other

power generating

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power-generating

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mechanisms since there are two major drawbacks

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resource extraction.

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, it is important to consider that

oil

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is a finite resource. In

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,

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means that eventually the world will run out of

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and the multiple machines that depend on that will become obsolete. Since

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date is difficult to estimate, it is sensible that ways to contour

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lack should be developed quickly. If possible, renewable sources

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as

wind powered

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or solar energy should be preferred so that

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cycle does not repeat itself.

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, the extraction of

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is probably going to get harder and more expensive with time. Once

oil

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has to be extracted from the internal

layers

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of the Earth, it is presumable that the outer

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will be the first ones to be exploited and that with time there will only be

oil

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left in the deeper

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of the planet. Reaching these

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require

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a much more technologic and robust machinery

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much more technologic and robust machinery

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and,

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much more expensive.

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spent

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avoided by the development of other cheaper power sources sooner. In conclusion, I strongly

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believe

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that investing

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new methods of energy generation is better than investing in the

oil

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industry. Solar and

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wind-generated

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power are the best options for the future and should be developed and spread as soon as possible.