The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting amd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart above provides information about the distribution of three types of ingredients used in food
such
as sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
in different meals during day to day
life that might have a negative Add a hyphen
day-to-day
affect
if they Correct your spelling
effect
overused
.
Add a missing verb
are overused
Overall
, as the chart illustrates sodium
and saturated fat contribute significantly in
dinner Change preposition
to
while
,
nearly about half of the Remove the comma
apply
sugar
we consume can be find
in snacks.Change the verb form
be found
Moreover
breakfast has the least amount of all three categories which Add a comma
Moreover,
are
less than 20%.
The proportion of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
sodium
and saturated fat are relatively similar in lunch which are 29% and 26% respectively however
, added sugar
percentages in lunch is
slightly lower.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Although
half of the portion of snacks are made of added sugar
,the rate of sodium
and saturated fat in snacks are
around 20%.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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