The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting amd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 

Summarize the information by selecting amd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart above provides information about the distribution of three types of ingredients used in food
such
as
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
in different meals during
day to day
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life that might have a negative
affect
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if they
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.
Overall
, as the chart illustrates
sodium
and saturated fat contribute significantly
in
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dinner
while
,
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nearly about half of the
sugar
we consume can
be find
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in snacks.
Moreover
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breakfast has the least amount of all three categories which
are
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less than 20%. The proportion of
sodium
and saturated fat are relatively similar in lunch which are 29% and 26% respectively
however
, added
sugar
percentages in lunch
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slightly lower.
Although
half of the portion of snacks are made of added
sugar
,the rate of
sodium
and saturated fat in snacks
are
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around 20%.
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