The line graph gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph provides input about the amounts of guests in various London museums during summer vacations in 2013.The unit is measured in thousands of visitors.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the last
month witnessed sharply growing
in all museums. Replace the word
sharp growth
In addition
, British
Museum Correct article usage
the British
has
the highest number of guestsWrong verb form
had
thought
the vacation ,Correct your spelling
throughout
whereas
Science
Exposition Correct article usage
the Science
was
the lowest one.
Verb problem
had
According to
what is shown, National
History Correct article usage
the National
fair
and British show started from Capitalize word
Fair
closes
figures in June. Replace the word
close
While
the British climbed 150 thousand in July then
dropped until reached 500 thousand. National History wane
from 550 to 380 Change the verb form
wanes
then
increased slightly to 390.Finally
both of them intension in same
amount.
In terms of the red line, Change the article
the same
firstly
achieved 400000. Secondly
it declined to 37000 visitors. Add a comma
Secondly,
Thirdly
it continues decreased
to 300000.As all in Change the verb form
to decrease
September
it rose 150 thousand.Add a comma
September,
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