You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given below illustration explores data regarding the fabrication of frozen
fish
pies.
Overall
, there is an explanation for manufacturing cold pies, which are
initially
divided into
the
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regular products,
such
as potatoes, raw
sea food
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seafood
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and peas and over some time,
as well as
actions that are combined together.
However
, there are two main lines of processing food in one piece. Everything
,
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started from the bottom just from regular products. They have to go through a process of cleaning or steaming food because these steps are essential at the beginning.
For instance
, to boil pieces of potatoes or to water pavor marinated steaks of
fish
. After processing the potato, there is only one action
to
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shift all slices into packages and deliver them to the store.
Likewise
, in the majority of cases, a steamed
fish
had to be checked by workers to prove, that these steaks didn't have any infections. The next step
,
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is to prepare the whole pie with peases and sauces and
then
add the main products,
such
as
fish
and potato. These packages should have been wrapped and be ready for transporting them into the freezers. The final step is needed
for
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deliver to various supermarkets before they melt.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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