The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares data about Vietnamese people,who studied in 3 countries,mainly Russia,France and the USA from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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it is clear that
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students
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,who learned in the US sharply increased.
Moreover
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,interest in studying in Russia fell. At the outset,
although
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at the start of the 21st century,only nearly 1.5
million
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people learned in the United States of America,in 2005
this
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number
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went up to 2
million
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.
Furthermore
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, in 2010 3
million
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students
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were in the United States,but
at the end
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of the period it jumped to 5
million
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,in 2000 3
million
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Vietnamese
students
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were studying with Russians,
however
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,
this
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number
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slightly decreased to approximately 1.8
million
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in 2010.
Additionally
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,after 5 years 2.5
million
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students
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were in Russia. 3.5
million
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people studied with French in 2000.
While
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this
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number
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dropped to 2.5
million
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in 2005.
Nonetheless
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,
this
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number
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did not change for around 5 years, till 2010,though in 2015
number
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of
students
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rapidly climbed to 4.5
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, million, number with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • chosen to study
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