The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares data about Vietnamese people,who studied in 3 countries,mainly Russia,France and the USA from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
it is clear that
students
,who learned in the US sharply increased.
Moreover
,interest in studying in Russia fell. At the outset,
although
at the start of the 21st century,only nearly 1.5
million
people learned in the United States of America,in 2005
this
number
went up to 2
million
.
Furthermore
, in 2010 3
million
students
were in the United States,but
at the end
of the period it jumped to 5
million
,in 2000 3
million
Vietnamese
students
were studying with Russians,
however
,
this
number
slightly decreased to approximately 1.8
million
in 2010.
Additionally
,after 5 years 2.5
million
students
were in Russia. 3.5
million
people studied with French in 2000.
While
this
number
dropped to 2.5
million
in 2005.
Nonetheless
,
this
number
did not change for around 5 years, till 2010,though in 2015
number
of
students
rapidly climbed to 4.5
million
.
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  • average number
  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • chosen to study
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