The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The pie chart depicts the framework of graduated anthropology student from the university after ending their degree course. The table below provides data about Anthrology salaries after 5 years of experience.
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, it is clear from the illustration that the highest percentage of graduated anthropology students worked full-time jobs at around 52%.While
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After 5 years of work, the most paid graduated student was one who worked in government
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