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Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
 the chart shows four
country
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countries
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 experienced
different
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a different
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trend
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trends
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 in the time period,France and Italy it's a
samiller
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similar
smaller
familiar
 steady,
on the other
hand
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the
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Austria has
rasien dramtically
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risen dramatically
 but,
the
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Germany almost stead, in the
last
 period has
raised
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 during
this
 period. The graph shows Italy started
at
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in
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 1995
spent
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and spent
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 money about 50 dollars
while
 France
is
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spent
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 almost 55 dollars.
By
contrast
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the
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Germeny
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Germany
 begin
in
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at
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 80 dollars and
the
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Austria
start
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starts
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 at 30 prices. In
conclude
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conclusion
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 all four countries
ends
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ended
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 in 2005
while
 spent money about 85 except Germany
a
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bout
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about
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 95.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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