the pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in france
The
given
two pie graphs illustrate the proportion of 5 different types of Verb problem
apply
energy
resources in France in the year
1995 and 2005.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, while
it is evident that the most significant segment in both years is coal, both nuclear and other energy
sources
accounted for the lowest percentage among other types of energy
. Furthermore
, a significant decrease was seen in petrol, whereas
nuclear and other energy
sources
almost doubled over the period.
In the year 1995, the chart shows that coal constitutes
29.80% of the total. Wrong verb form
constituted
Following
this
, gas and petrol make up 29.63% and 29.27% respectively. These three segments together account for almost 90%, indicating their dominance in the distribution. The smallest contribution comes from both nuclear and other energy
sources
, with only 10.3%. This
highlights the relatively minor role of them in the overall
distribution.
On the other hand
, in 2005 the percentage of coal and gas remained relatively unchanged with slight
increase to 30.93% and 30.31% respectively. Add an article
a slight
In contrast
, nuclear and other energy
sources
showed crucial growth in the final year, while
nuclear energy
contributes
10.10% of the total, other Wrong verb form
contributed
sources
of energy
constitute
9.10% of the whole Wrong verb form
constituted
energy
in 2005. A dramatic decline in the contribution of petrol energy
was seen in 2005 which accounted for only 19.55%.Submitted by saif_omar98 on
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