The table below shows the percentage of the population who rode bicycles in one town by age group in 2012

The table below shows the percentage of the population who rode bicycles in one town by age group in 2012
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The following table illustrates the
percentage
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of people who rode bikes in one city by age group in 2012.
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, it is noticeable that the
percentage
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of the population who were aged from 0 to 9 and rode bicycles in one town was the highest
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between all ages and almost the same between females and males,
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the lowest was adults aged between 40 and 59.
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, the children aged from 10 to 19 have the biggest difference between the two genders. As can be seen, the most popular aged between two genders who rode bikes are children aged between 0 and 9, at 52.5% and 51.2%. At the same time, the lowest
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who rode bikes was individuals from 40 to 59, at 13.17% for females and 9.3% for males. As the graph shows, the
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of females who were aged between 10 and 19 was 43.6% in 2012,
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the
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of males in the same age group was 25.1%.
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