The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
consumption for variety
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continent
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Overall
, water
mostly
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is mostly
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agricultural purposes in every continent, Change preposition
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whereas
the lowest use
of water
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water
consumption in the
North America and Correct article usage
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the
Europe, both Correct article usage
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continent
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water
for their industrial use
about 48-53%, also
39-32% used for agricultural use
and rest
of the (13% - 15% respectively used for domestic Correct article usage
the rest
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). While
, South America used 71% of the water
for their agricultural use
, 19% for domestic use
and finally
, 10% being used for industries.
On the other hand
, the
Africa, Central Correct article usage
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Asia
and the
South East Correct article usage
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Asia
used their highest amount of water
on
agricultural Change preposition
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use
around (84%, 88% and 81% sequentially). Moreover
, in Africa
9% of the Add a comma
Africa,
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a domestic
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Asia
and the
South East Correct article usage
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Asia
used
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water
for it about 7%. Additionally
, 7-12% water
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