The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart shows the data of five portions of fruit and vegetables eaten by children, males and females per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The provided chart gives information about 5 fractions of fruit and vegetables consumed by kids, women and men per day in the United Kingdom from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
, over the period, all proportions had an upward trend,
however
, the percentage of females stabilised at the first position
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
rising gradually, throughout the whole period.
To begin
with, ladies started at one-fifth per cent in the very beginning, which was the highest among others. In 6 years, it reached a high, surpassing a third per cent, before steadily going down to around 30% again in the next 2 years. Eventually, in 2008, it stood at 30% by standing at the first place.
On the other hand
, unlikely, children and men remained stable between 2001 and 2003, being at roughly 12 and 17 per cent respectively. Till 2007, both followed the same pattern by increasing moderately, which they climbed to their highest levels.
However
, juveniles and males experienced a slight decrease levelling off at 24 and 26% at the final stage.
Submitted by novruzluahmed2007 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption trends
  • Demographics
  • Public health campaigns
  • Per capita
  • Consumption patterns
  • Nutritional intake
  • Statistical analysis
  • Dietary habits
  • Health recommendations
  • Daily servings
What to do next:
Look at other essays: