You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.

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Dear Manager, hope
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letter finds you well and believe you are in good health and in high spirits.I am writing
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letter to share my happiness with the service I
recieved
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received
from your staff named Rahul
last
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week. On 20 March , my computer
stop
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working and I have less knowledge about the internal fault .After, watching videos on
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I
could
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not able to
reactify
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rectify
the problem.When
,
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I come to know from my friend your shop has
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reputation to solve these problems. Next day when I call at
ur
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service
center
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, I found your staff is very polite and caring and they
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suggest
suggested
me
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to come
at
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store
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the store
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with my computer to
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diagnose
the problem.
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, in the evening they
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me with the good news that my
compuuter
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computer
start
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working and they assured me to delivered
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my home
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tomorrow.In the
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, I want you to
thanks
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your staff
to solve
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my problem. with regards,
navdeep
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suitable writing tone
Ensure consistent use of formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding abbreviations like 'ur'.
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Avoid minor grammatical errors such as conjunction usage and sentence structure for a more polished letter.
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Effective use of a personal anecdote to praise the staff.
logical structure
Clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
The letter includes a polite greeting and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • express my gratitude
  • extremely impressed
  • customer service
  • initial contact
  • efficient
  • responsive
  • professionalism
  • went above and beyond
  • satisfactory repair
  • commend
  • acknowledge
  • convey my thanks
  • outstanding service
  • appreciation
  • high standard
  • recommend
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