Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A) Introduce yourself B) Explain what the problem is C) Suggest solution

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I hope

this

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letter finds you well and believe you are in good health.I am writing to register my complaint regarding the

construction

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which is taking place near my house. My name is Navdeep and I live at 100 Street in Edmonton.The problem I faced

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day

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was I

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could

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not able to park my car in front of my house because

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construction

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a construction

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worker had closed the entrance gate.

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this

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high

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the high

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volume of noise

are

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produced by

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machinery

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as generators and pumps is affecting my kid's studies. In the

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. I want you to recommend some possible solutions to

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problem. Install an acoustic panel near

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machinery so less amount of noise

heard

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is heard

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by people.

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construction

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activity

delayed

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for the week because next

week

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exams were finished. Looking forward to hearing a positive and prompt response from your side and hope you understand my concern. Yours sincerely, Navdeep

navdeepbajaj89Fri Nov 15 2024

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coherence cohesion

Address dividing each paragraph into a single idea to improve clarity.

task achievement

Try to provide specific solutions in the suggestion part to improve task achievement.

task achievement

The letter maintains a respectful tone throughout, suitable for a formal letter of complaint.

coherence cohesion

The beginning and closing are appropriately structured.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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The Greeting

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