The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.

The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
The given pie charts compare data about the fraction of people who have various academic qualifications in a special country at two points in time namely, 1980 and 2008.
Overall
, it was important that most people upgrade their knowledge to postgraduate;
additionally
, in both times
science
subjects were more popular than arts.
According to
the diagrams, in the beginning, Masters
Science
, the most popular situation that the population followed, formed 29%;
then
in 2008, its portion was the same as the prior.
However
, the first degree of art was composed of exactly a quarter in 1980 after that, it reduced to 11% in 2008, but the first degree of
Science
made up the same percentage at just under one-fifth in both times. The graphs demonstrate that P.H.D.
Science
rose from 13% in 1980 to 30% in 2008;
moreover
, it hit the first level.
In addition
, at the start, not only Master's but
also
PhD's of art respectively constituted 12% and 2%;
thereafter
, their proportion climbed to 13% and 7% in 2008.
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