The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts below show the
amount
of teenagers learning a foreign Change the quantifier
number
language
in a country whose main medium for communication was English, and the 3 most popular language
being learned in the years 1984 and 2007.
Fix the agreement mistake
languages
Overall
, there was a decrease of approximately 20% in students
learning a new language
in 2007 from its original figure of 80% in 1984. Moreover
, French remained the most studied language
in both years.
In 1984, 80% of students
were studying a foreign language
, approximately 50% were girls and 30% were boys. In the same year, French was studied the most with 50% of the population, while
20% learned German and just about 10% of students
were learning Spanish.
In 2007, only 60% of the population was engaged in the task. However
, similarly
in 1984, more girls were involved than boys, with 40% of the group comprising girls and the remaining 20% being boys. Add a comma
similarly,
Moreover
, the ranking of the 3 languages remained the same in 2007 with French having the most students
, German second,
and Spanish last
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