The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the Unite d Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the shares of
expenditures
for five Common types in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Use synonyms
In addition
, it is described as percentages.
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Firstly
, the United States and the United Kingdom have the highest Linking Words
expenditures
for Housing approximately more than 20% . Followed by Transportation and Food which is nearly 10%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, they spent less on Health care and Clothing less than 10%.
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Moreover
, Canada has a similar high proportion of Linking Words
expenditures
for Housing and Transportation at 20% Use synonyms
Also
, Japan and Canada have the same lowest proportion for Health care which is nearly 5% but still higher than the United Kingdom. Linking Words
Moreover
, Japan has the highest percentages for Housing and Clothing.
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Overall
, they spent for Food and Housing than other categories , Linking Words
although
, they spent less on Health care and Clothing. Linking Words
This
places Food and Housing significantly ahead of other Linking Words
expenditures
.Use synonyms
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